Blog #11:

I think my weakness is putting my my thoughts on paper. My ideas make seance in my mind but not on the paper; that's when ill need to reread what i wrote to make it understandable. On Thursday I'll need to take a deep berth, follow instructions read the passage over, create an outline of my ideas and things sporting to sport it. I'll then need to summarizes and agree or disagree with the main idea. use my ideas and sporting ideas to make my point (on agreeing or disagreeing), make sure to mention when and where. create a well conclusion and reread and correct and tense shifting or any sentence that needs to be either added on or taken out.